WALT: Write a truly captivating Holiday recount
Blurb: We were told to write a recount from our teacher. We had to make our spelling correct and punctuation perfect. Hopefully, you enjoy it!
Reflection: What I did well - I added punctuation.
The part I liked the most was putting the backgrounds on and publishing my recount.
I need to improve on: add a little more punctuation and don't get distracted.
Kia ora Pounamu,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your holiday recount and the way you described what you did using the 5 senses. Maybe next time you could add more detail to your paragraphs. Blog ya later! Ms Peters.
Kia ora Pounamu,
ReplyDeleteI really liked reading your holiday recount and I also really liked how you described your story. Maybe next time you could use paragraphs in your story. Blog ya later, from Ahi.